i like some. sorta the trippy thing. its just that one is kinda simple alot of people have done stuff like that. i have seen way too much stuff like that. i sujest( spelled wrong) like if its going to be trippy put some sort of object in the center thats also trippy it will draw the eye to it and the back will give it a feeling of spacing out so its more trippy. i think you can do something better just try harder.
Kinsei
meh... not really....
TheDeliMan
dick